Monday, January 02, 2006

first one....

I was awake day and night,
with the future in sight

When every one had more than one,
I was searching for just one

When weekends were fun for them,
I was shunning away from them

this time I needed a companion,
but could not speak to anyone

Finally, I too got a letter,
hope it was for the better

When I showed it to my friends,
they were happy to be my friend

Life changed it's way,
my first appointment(job) letter, finally had it's say....

8 comments:

DD said...

Skellllllly.... you are ROCKING!! Way to go :)

Anonymous said...

Skely, so unusual of you to write such rythamic poems. are u alrite mate?

Good one..

- sudar.

abc said...

for a change, creative thinking. :)

ck said...

So your first job didn't come easy? Anyways hard won success is sweeter.

Good one, I like your choice of words

-ck

Anonymous said...

Skely, you are gone!!! :-) or rather bowled!!! in ur language.

C'mon whom are u fooling with the letter thing? you probably got the job much ahead of others! this poem is not for a job letter!!!!

Good one!!! you have started to think :-) Lets see how long u r a bachelor!

DD said...

Seriously! Whom are you trying to fool, Skely? I can vouch that you were the first one in your class to get a job!

"When I showed it to my friends,
they were happy to be my friend"
Ada paavi, idhu unakke konjam toomuch-a theriyala?

Preethika said...

Skely, when i started reading i thought u were talking about err... some ga!!!
When i finished reading, the reaction was :-)

Unknown said...

i don believe you saying " i don have friends"
look at the number of comments.. (one included now)