Sunday, January 01, 2006

she and he.....

she saw
he saw,
eyes met
heart wet

she laughed
he laughed,
eyes wept
heart swept

she spoke
he spoke,
words changed
hearts exchanged

she thought
he thought,
truth lieing
heart flying

she dreamt
he dreamt,
ticketless travelling
heartful living

she sensed
he sensed,
both senseless......

9 comments:

DD said...

Oh My GOD!!! Skely, welcome to the esteemed group of ora poets and poetesses! :D
So, you found a way to give a startling start to 2006, huh? You could have named it "she, he and heart!" Cool buddy!!

Vijay Gandhi said...

Amazing man!

You have transferred your humorous talent from prose to poetry!!!

Skely, wats going on? A guy like you cannot write a poetry unless there is something going on...wats up???

Skely said...

Guys,
Come on.. Be truthful...If I read it now.. It is so kiddish..

Anuradha Sridharan said...

Skely, Very good attempt at poetry. Liked these lines :-

she spoke
he spoke,
words changed
hearts exchanged

Wonderful. Keep writing more.

BTW, I'm wondering why so many ppl have started writing "He and She" kind of poems. Something is seriously happening. Be truthful and spill the beans.

Skely said...

@VJ,ANU: Well nothing is happening, just that I wanted to write a poem, (inspired you all guys) and decided on this topic..(always easy to write about he and she..)

abc said...

who is the poetess inside you

ck said...

I loved these lines,

she dreamt
he dreamt,
ticketless travelling
heartful living

way to go buddy.

-ck

Anonymous said...

excellent poetry karthik da, and I can't believe it's you who wrote this. but Karthik daaaa, what (or rather WHO?!?!) made you write this?!?!? I know its not like -- "Well nothing is happening, just that I wanted to write a poem" -- anyway, keep it up... Pandey

Preethi said...

Hehe.. I liked this - both senseless... the last line of the poem..:)