she saw
he saw,
eyes met
heart wet
she laughed
he laughed,
eyes wept
heart swept
she spoke
he spoke,
words changed
hearts exchanged
she thought
he thought,
truth lieing
heart flying
she dreamt
he dreamt,
ticketless travelling
heartful living
she sensed
he sensed,
both senseless......
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Oh My GOD!!! Skely, welcome to the esteemed group of ora poets and poetesses! :D
So, you found a way to give a startling start to 2006, huh? You could have named it "she, he and heart!" Cool buddy!!
Amazing man!
You have transferred your humorous talent from prose to poetry!!!
Skely, wats going on? A guy like you cannot write a poetry unless there is something going on...wats up???
Guys,
Come on.. Be truthful...If I read it now.. It is so kiddish..
Skely, Very good attempt at poetry. Liked these lines :-
she spoke
he spoke,
words changed
hearts exchanged
Wonderful. Keep writing more.
BTW, I'm wondering why so many ppl have started writing "He and She" kind of poems. Something is seriously happening. Be truthful and spill the beans.
@VJ,ANU: Well nothing is happening, just that I wanted to write a poem, (inspired you all guys) and decided on this topic..(always easy to write about he and she..)
who is the poetess inside you
I loved these lines,
she dreamt
he dreamt,
ticketless travelling
heartful living
way to go buddy.
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excellent poetry karthik da, and I can't believe it's you who wrote this. but Karthik daaaa, what (or rather WHO?!?!) made you write this?!?!? I know its not like -- "Well nothing is happening, just that I wanted to write a poem" -- anyway, keep it up... Pandey
Hehe.. I liked this - both senseless... the last line of the poem..:)
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